683th Meeting

15 SZTM members and 14 guests. Ariel Wang won Best Speaker with “Close Relationship”. Best Table Topics went to guest Jeff. IPP Sunny Wang was best evaluator. TME Joan Zhang was best facilitator.

大家好! 正式跟大家问声周末好!
以下是第 683th 例会的精彩汇报!
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♬ I Have A Dream

大表哥 Lizhen 说“My dream is to speak fluent English, like Joanand Jessica do.”

Louis 说“Daydream is also attainable.”

Jeff 说“Dream is the origin of life. It takes passion torealize our dream.”（Doctor Jeff 实现了自己的作家梦！！！）👏👏👏

Ming 说“Dream means possibility. We need to make plansfor our dream.”

Christine 说“Hardworking is a kind of personality. We need tohave such characteristic to have our dream come true.”

你的梦想是什么呢？实现梦想又需付出怎样的努力？
听完关于梦想的故事，各位演讲者又会为我们带来什么呢？

♬头马演说家

你还记得《泰坦尼克号》里的 Rose 和 Jack 吗？他们再次双双在 Revolutionary Road 里面出境。VPE 大大Jessica为我们讲述了他们在剧中的爱情故事，并告诉我们，当我们有 angry, worried, feared 等情绪时，该如何面对并消解。

我们每个人作为独立个体，其实与周围的人有着某种连接。The more we feel connected, the happier we willbe. 如何与身边的人建立 close relationship 是人生的课题之一。Ariel提出了自己的见解，与大家讨论了如何与家人、朋友、同事建立 close relationship。

你有粤 B 牌吗？你想有粤 B 牌吗？你知道粤 B 牌通过摇号和竞价两种方式得到的概率分别有多大吗？大表哥Lizhen用强大的数据告诉我们Bidding 的概率比 lottery 高多少。还有一个月的最佳 bidding 时间，请大家速速行动！

♬头马评委

TTE Adrian 先扬后抑，分别点出大表哥，Louis, Jeff, Ming 和 Christine 的出彩之处，随后给出提升建议——gesture, story, turning point 和 example 会让演说更有说服力。

IE Fish 告诉 Ariel，F4（first time, failure, flaw, frustration）会让演讲内容更丰富，更有层次。（记住啦！下次用起来~·）

VPE 大大的演讲内容丰富，Link 指出, “You should talk more about the actor andactress.”嗯，Rose 和 Jack 塑造的形象太经典，在《光荣之路》中，他们又是怎样的背景呢？

好的,穿 T 恤也是帅 Link!

Chunyan 博士的点评笔记可以单成一篇演讲了，“大表哥的演讲非常 informative，为大家提供了很多信息，同时也因为列出太多数据，重点不是很突出。”

本场的三官（时间官、哼哈官、语法官）非常给力，大长腿 Ree 从上次的联合会议中 get 到秘籍，毫不客气地指出各位用了多少个 unnecessary words；amazing Jane 再次发挥魔力，从修辞、语法等角度指出亮点（随后专门附上 amazing grammarian’s report）；sunnySunny 告诉大家各自用了多少时间，强调时间把控的重要性。

注意啦！注意啦！本季度最犀利的 GE 大人 SunnyWang Lian 要开“批斗”大会了，谁也别想逃过！哈哈哈哈!

想被粉红小姐姐批的请排队!

“作为主席，要维护 SZTM 的荣誉，会旗要整齐摆放……这个是主席的职责……这一点主席要做到……”（心疼 Joan）

“SAA 要提前做好准备工作。”
“时间官要提前到场。”
“IE Fish 要注意自己的发型，形象很重要。”

“Link ……做得很好，没有什么要补充的。”（什么？没有批斗？！是不是贿赂了前前主席？果然会挣钱就是好。）

……
虽然犀利，但是幽默也有用，是我喜欢的风格！而且 GE 大人是完全脱稿点评！

♬Amazing Grammarian’s Report

前面预告了一下 amazing Jane 的精彩报告，以下就直接呈现，欢迎围观。

➢ TheInspiring Ideas

Link: I have a dream to be a president;

I have a dream to see all of you in this roomraise up your hand.

Louis: Action taking, determination and insistence can make your dreamattainable.

Jeff: (表白 doctor，将自己奉献给伟大的医疗卫生事业当中)用 Personally 铿锵有力的表达自己观点

Personally，I dream tomake more doctors into volunteers to give treatment to people in need.

Ming：Life is full of possibilities; It’s better tomake your dream come true than dreaming.

➢ Thethoughtful Ideas

Ming：（富有哲思的自我介绍）The more self-introduction, the more I knowmyself.

Jessica: Emotions can bring you life experience; but it will alsokill you as you can’t control it well.

If you were angry, justkeep silence; if you were worried, just do other things to distract your focus.

We may combine theextreme emotions(love & fear) to your life, but you can’t detach theemotions you love.

➢ Thepower of parallelism (emphasize again and again; easy to remember)

When introducing her family background, Arieluses parallelism beginning with “we were born to be ”.

Ariel: We were born to be in the current family; We were born to bethe child of our parents; we were born to be the sister or brother of oursiblings; we were born to be living in the same house.

And when providing the solution to how to dealwith the conflicts with family relationship, Ariel use parallelism beginningwith “we have to accept”, in which “ Acceptance” was the key point in thisparagraph.

Ariel: We have to accept ourselves; we have to accept others; and wehave to accept the fact that everyone is living in the world in his or her ownway.

♬头马荣誉

更让人意想不到的是：

来访的 guests 比会员还多！
来访的 guests 比会员还多！
来访的 guests 比会员还多！
好开森！好鸡冻！
下面这些可爱的人儿里面有你吗？
欢迎常来！实现你的演说梦！

SZTM 新图整理中,请各位看官耐心等待!❤️