Meeting #708

Meeting #708

DateTuesday, 7 January 2020

SZTM's 708th regular meeting on January 7, 2020, welcomed back a former member the club nicknames grandpa, Koby Sa, who served as General Evaluator after members ran into him on a hike. The night was a marathon of seven prepared speeches, including Treven on not bowing his head to his phone, April on her path toward the DTM award, and Ariel on choosing gifts thoughtfully, each followed by an evaluator's feedback.

The club posted its own write-up that week. Some of what it said, in the words it used:

曾经是 SZTM 的一员，一次在嘉宾群里发现 Koby 爷爷又在关心我们的会议，勾起无数头马的娃儿们对爷爷的想念…Koby 爷爷参加会议后马上 Renew membership

对于 Eric 的评价，how the right things they do 不重要，重要的是 how good they feel…Eric need true love…True love makes the global warming.

Treven 带来演讲<Don’t Bow Your Head>。讲述自己亲身经历自己亲妈治疗颈椎病的心历路程

爷爷回来了记 708 次会议

2020.1.7 深圳头马出品

爷爷是谁，他怎么回来了

爷爷是就是 Koby Sa, 曾经是 SZTM 的一员，一次在嘉宾群里发现 Koby 爷爷又在关心我们的会议，勾起无数头马的娃儿们对爷爷的想念，后来就安排了周六的莲花山出游，去见见在莲花山锻炼的爷爷和他美丽优雅的夫人。那次郊游后 VPE April 又试着问问 Koby 爷爷可以做我们新年第一期会议的 GE 吗？爷爷答应了。April 和娃儿们都兴奋极了。

爷爷真容

爷爷英语口音很好听，人也风趣，还是个拥有众多粉丝的网红爷爷。虽然这次会议嘉宾众多，更是由 Eric 主持，Adrian, Carol 等区长级的老将纷纷加入，但在 Koby 爷爷面前真的还是娃儿。Koby 爷爷参加会议后马上 Renew membership, 进群后情况大致是这样的。

好了，让我们重回马拉松演讲备稿演讲演讲与点评 Treven

”The best speaker among the doctors, the best doctor among the speakers.” Treven 带来演讲<Don’t Bow Your Head>。讲述自己亲身经历自己亲妈治疗颈椎病的心历路程，告诫大家不要做“低头族”，更是引用著名企业家做企业、登珠峰的例子说明面对困难，我们也不要做“低头族”。

01 演讲者
01 点评者

Fish

亮点：有激情、声音洪亮。

建议：可以有个更有力的开场，如”Do you know…?”;可以只关注一个点；总结多一点

April<April’s TM Project>

两年前被头马的“套路”套进来的 April 说她今晚有两个演讲。第一个演讲，关于 April 的 DTM 计划，从 guest，member，treasure，VPM、VPPR 到现在的 VPE，到将来的 President

第二个演讲关于 April 的 VPE 计划。April 告诉我们，2020 是 leap year,也就是润年，366 天。

除了 115 天的 holiday, 我们只有 251 天的 working day 了，但是 VPE 还有这么的计划要实现的，等着大家有空都来帮忙做 meeting manager

02 演讲者
02 点评者

Adrian

亮点: Ask questions/Smile

建议: Make audience Confusion: It’s DTM project or VPE project?

Sunny

Sunny-Wang Lian 和 Coral Ban 搭档模拟真实的求职面试场景。Sunny-Wang Lian 作为求职者回答关于自我介绍、上一份工作辞职的原因、对于应聘岗位的看法、薪资要求等“十个为什么”的问题。

03 演讲者
03 点评者

Vivian

亮点：”Come in”模拟真实场景；Coral asked questions 非常真实
建议：回答面试官的关于 sale manager 这个职位的问题，还可以更吸引人一点

Lizhen

, Lizhen 告诉我们，准备会议资料、制定会议流程、提前把会议要讨论的问题发给参会者、控制时间、关注会议的重点、做好记录、最后总结！

04 演讲者
04 点评者

Leah

亮点：made no necessary or pause, expreessed idea clearly.

建议：very common topic，tips are important but we may have known that before, it’s better to bring us something new and more profesional

Ariel

<Maybe That’s not What He Wants>, Ariel 通过讲述挑选礼物送男朋友的例子说明我们不要忘记挑选礼物的“初心”。”Don’t do unto others what you don’t want others do unto you.” “Never forget why you do things for others with a good will, and then the happiness can be acquired.”

05 演讲者
05 点评者

Zoe

亮点：Started with questions; used your own stories; confident with smile.

improved a lot
建议：You can tell us how to choose a gift!

Jessca

, Jessica 讲述了一个运用公关策略处理公关问题的过程。”Yes, Shelia is an employee of our company, but she is also a girl like you, has her own emotions. We apologize that she didn’t behave that well. However, we also should understand her, because we are the same.”

06 演讲者
06 点评者

Louis

亮点：Public relationship is an challenge; Structure/organization is natural and smooth

建议：need more examples.

Carol

, IE Jane 给出的题目是在旅游过程中，出现和父母不同意见时怎么做。talking machine Coral Ban 说以前读书时不经常回家，现在会回馈父母，带父母去各地旅游。并讲述自己和父母旅途中的故事。能量金句：”They also want to see the world.” “I can take them to see the world.”

07 演讲者
07 点评者

Jane

亮点：“It is time to take our parents to see the world.” “I didn’t do that, but Coral did that! Your speech is successful and I learn a lot from you!”

建议：”You didn’t answer my question-the disagreement.”

嘉宾介绍和 1 月生日庆祝

Facilitators’s Intoduction & Reports

Chrissy

Time is money, but money is not time! （寸金难买寸光阴) Those Speakers who use over time can’t win best

01 Timer
02 Ah-counter

Quentin (guest)

April 太多”so”, Sunny wang Lian 太多”en”

面对大家迫不及待地问”Who is the queen?”,他笑着说: Maybe it is me.

Alice (guest)

单复数问题，即使很熟练的英语使用者也会犯错
主语问题，She/He傻傻分不清
Alice 获得今晚的最佳 facilitator!
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Grammerian
04 GE

Koby Sa

Philosopher 爷爷一来，金句多的记不下来！对于大家，爷爷说今晚（2020 的第一场会议）很多人迟到但是还是抽时间来了。说明我们 2019 年和 2020 年都不错，because we have a lot of guest. 我们会 keep growing. 在这里，how the right things they do 不重要，重要的是 how good they feel. 对于 TME, “TME did a good job.” 今晚的 speaker 比较多，作为主持人 Eric 能金句不断介绍那么多的 speaker, 很强了。“Eric need true love.” 爷爷开玩笑地说,因为 Eric 在主持过程中提到了 true love。(冬天里，今晚的会议室却那么热，爷爷说是 because of the true love. True love makes the global warming.爷爷对 SZTM 也是真爱，会后马上把会费交了，重新回到 family 群，引起一阵骚动，葫芦娃们太想念爷爷了！

Eric

今晚是真情真热真有爱的会议， Guest 反响不错，大家在众多嘉宾，优秀演讲者和会服人员的优秀表现中感到放松和开心，这一切离不了专业、亲和、幽默的 TME Eric 的串场加持，我想 Eric Bro 到了 Koby 爷爷的年纪，也会是这样帅气迷人。

05 TME
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